NPR (National Public Radio) criticized my good friend Jocko Weyland for a paragraph appearing in the New York Times and then asked for their online readers to edit the aforementioned paragraphed.
With your help, maybe. From yesterday’s New York Times, on newcomers noticing the “phenomenon” of carrying umbrellas when it snows:
Jocko Weyland /
Yet deep down in his soul, the transplant will hold on to the notion that umbrellas are to be used only as protection against the rain, which is wet and, when it drenches the clothes and skin, makes one uncomfortable.
Sharpen those red pencils, y’all.
This was my editing job.
Yet deep down in his soul, the transplant will hold on to the notion that umbrellas are to be used only as protection against the rain, which is wet and, when it drenches the clothes and skin, makes one uncomfortable.
Obviously I Actually I learned my editing skills from reading Budweiser cans. Less is more with 3.2 beer.
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